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I like it. Light fare. Has the flavor of a senryu. Good play between the dull knife and the bruise.
Our lives seem to run in parallels. Just yesterday I was cutting a bruise from an apple for my little girls, but with a small knife I had just sharpened - one of my favorite tasks.
cutting out the bruise - the apple is almost all gone
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I like it. Light fare. Has the flavor of a senryu. Good play between the dull knife and the bruise.
Our lives seem to run in parallels. Just yesterday I was cutting a bruise from an apple for my little girls, but with a small knife I had just sharpened - one of my favorite tasks.
cutting out
the bruise - the apple is almost all gone
yes, these simple tasks often have more
to them than merely "tasks."
bill
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