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Friday, November 14, 2008

after the wake petals on the table

w. f. owen


upinVermont said...

Hi w.f.,

Just checking out your site - along with other Haiku blogs. Just finished reading Basho's Journey to the North - haiku translated faithfully as being one line. I like the effect in some ways.

In your Haiku of Nov. 14, I wonder if it's necessary for the word "flower". This would seem to be implied by "petals"?

Look forward to more Haiku.

Check out my site if you're curious. I've taken up Haiku as a way to turn my mind back to poetry - in all its forms. So I enjoy reading sites like yours.

w. f. owen said...

hi patrick,

i think you are right about that haiku.
it felt a bit "not quite right." so, i shall
change it. thanks.


upinVermont said...

my pleasure...

it's already the 15th of November. I await your next haiku...