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Tuesday, November 25, 2008

the flawless persimmon has a seed

w. f. owen

7 comments:

ed markowski said...

bill,
our sixth white thanksgiving in the last seven years was clinched yesterday with a beautiful five inch snowfall...
ed


snow
the sunspots
on a beggar's hand

w. f. owen said...

hi ed,

that sounds beautiful. it finally got cool
here--about 60.

nice haiku. thanks for stopping by!

bill

upinVermont said...

Beautiful, Bill.

I waited awhile before I posted. Like the greatest Haiku, this works at many levels.

The best from you, that I have read so far.

w. f. owen said...

thanks patrick. i truly appreciate
your comments.

bill

GINA said...

this haiku is gorgeous ... so many levels indeed ...

the flawless persimmon has a seed

my first thought was the flawless had a flaw and it was the seed and then i thought no, wait, its that the seed will grow another flawless (or so the theory goes) ... so very nicely done here >>> Gina

w. f. owen said...

thank you gina for your generous comment.
of course, the persimmon tree is bare now . . .
hmm, perhaps a haiku there.

thanks,
bill

w. f. owen said...

thank you gina for your generous comment.
of course, the persimmon tree is bare now . . .
hmm, perhaps a haiku there.

thanks,
bill