birthday i rake another pile of leaves
w. f. owen
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8 comments:
Good to see another.
You possess a self deprecating streak that reminds me of Issa & some modern American senryu poets - though your senryu are more sensitive and imagistic than the usual fair.
This last effort is strong. I'll think of it the next time I'm raking leaves.
raking leaves -
mixing in my daughter's colorful
laughter
indeed...yet another leaf on the pile
nice 1, bill
happy birthday
josh
hi patrick,
thanks for the comment and poem.
yes, i'm pretty busy these days, so
cannot post a poem a day, but i
do what i can. thanks for your
interest!
bill
thanks josh,
sigh:::indeed, it's that time of year.
good to see your comment,
bill
happy birthday, bill! nice poem.
bill,
no need to apologize. if I had more time I would be writing longer poems - blank verse & more lyrics. writing haiku give me a way to engage the world through poetry, a little every day.
between carpentry and family, not much time. post when you can. I do the same.
thanks patrick. i'll have something up here
again soon.
bill
thanks greg! another year older
and, um, wiser, i hope.
bill
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