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Tuesday, December 23, 2008
winter sun sparrows peck at the dead sunflower
w. f. owen
2 comments:
Anonymous
said...
This is a strong Haiku, Bill.
I only question the repetition of sun. But then you must have been aware of this (deciding to keep it).
thanks patrick. yes, i was aware of the repetition of "sun," though it is not true repetition (i.e., repeating the precise word "sun"). glad you liked it.
2 comments:
This is a strong Haiku, Bill.
I only question the repetition of sun. But then you must have been aware of this (deciding to keep it).
Strong. Inspires me.
thanks patrick. yes, i was aware of the repetition of
"sun," though it is not true repetition (i.e., repeating
the precise word "sun"). glad you liked it.
bill
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