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Tuesday, December 23, 2008

winter sun sparrows peck at the dead sunflower

w. f. owen

2 comments:

upinVermont said...

This is a strong Haiku, Bill.

I only question the repetition of sun. But then you must have been aware of this (deciding to keep it).

Strong. Inspires me.

w. f. owen said...

thanks patrick. yes, i was aware of the repetition of
"sun," though it is not true repetition (i.e., repeating
the precise word "sun"). glad you liked it.

bill