tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post2774502888315498692..comments2024-03-01T01:15:20.084-08:00Comments on haiku notebook by w. f. owen: w. f. owenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-45610201539389811302008-12-23T22:43:00.000-08:002008-12-23T22:43:00.000-08:00thanks patrick. yes, i was aware of the repetition...thanks patrick. yes, i was aware of the repetition of<BR/>"sun," though it is not true repetition (i.e., repeating<BR/>the precise word "sun"). glad you liked it.<BR/><BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-4793827686457210332008-12-23T18:58:00.000-08:002008-12-23T18:58:00.000-08:00This is a strong Haiku, Bill.I only question the r...This is a strong Haiku, Bill.<BR/><BR/>I only question the repetition of sun. But then you must have been aware of this (deciding to keep it).<BR/><BR/>Strong. Inspires me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com