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Saturday, November 28, 2009

river walk a dog zigzags the trail

w. f. owen

10 comments:

Magyar said...

Beagle, scent to scent, to scent.

Nice one, Bill. _m

w. f. owen said...

thank you m.

good day!
bill

catgirlslovehaiku said...

Love this haiku. Reminds me of one I recently wrote.

w. f. owen said...

thank you!

bill

Theresa Williams said...

Nice one. Dogs and Haiku just seem to go together. Can't tell you how much I enjoy your Haiku.

w. f. owen said...

thank you Theresa. yes, dogs and haiku (and cats
for that matter) DO seem to go together.

bill

Anonymous said...

I, generally, don't like two line haiku, it's just a personal preference. But, I really do like this one, a third line would be just excess baggage. Great job.

w. f. owen said...

thank you! however, it is a one-line haiku, not two. it might interest you that traditional Japanese haiku were (are) in one line as well (see Hiroaki Sato, One Hundred Frogs, 1983). of course, as you probably know, most English-language haiku are in three lines. anyway, thanks for taking the time to comment.

bill

Anonymous said...

After I posted, I realized I should have put one line haiku. I think my brain automatically divided it into two lines by habit, lol.

w. f. owen said...

yeah, i get those moments, too. :)

bill