tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post8744416497790761657..comments2024-03-01T01:15:20.084-08:00Comments on haiku notebook by w. f. owen: w. f. owenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-46312173849059334612010-01-04T08:58:51.926-08:002010-01-04T08:58:51.926-08:00yeah, i get those moments, too. :)
billyeah, i get those moments, too. :)<br /><br />billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-71656280538406335122010-01-04T08:31:20.115-08:002010-01-04T08:31:20.115-08:00After I posted, I realized I should have put one l...After I posted, I realized I should have put one line haiku. I think my brain automatically divided it into two lines by habit, lol.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-80608043665409075412010-01-03T19:36:30.328-08:002010-01-03T19:36:30.328-08:00thank you! however, it is a one-line haiku, not tw...thank you! however, it is a one-line haiku, not two. it might interest you that traditional Japanese haiku were (are) in one line as well (see Hiroaki Sato, One Hundred Frogs, 1983). of course, as you probably know, most English-language haiku are in three lines. anyway, thanks for taking the time to comment.<br /><br />billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-1405420500217457752010-01-03T17:42:31.548-08:002010-01-03T17:42:31.548-08:00I, generally, don't like two line haiku, it...I, generally, don't like two line haiku, it's just a personal preference. But, I really do like this one, a third line would be just excess baggage. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-31407867207059979742009-12-07T07:31:32.712-08:002009-12-07T07:31:32.712-08:00thank you Theresa. yes, dogs and haiku (and cats
f...thank you Theresa. yes, dogs and haiku (and cats<br />for that matter) DO seem to go together.<br /><br />billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-14048666861938177302009-12-07T02:01:48.070-08:002009-12-07T02:01:48.070-08:00Nice one. Dogs and Haiku just seem to go together...Nice one. Dogs and Haiku just seem to go together. Can't tell you how much I enjoy your Haiku.Theresa Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00103717736011804799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-61770208662588037892009-12-05T09:30:55.707-08:002009-12-05T09:30:55.707-08:00thank you!
billthank you!<br /><br />billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-71507943446062740152009-12-03T19:11:49.150-08:002009-12-03T19:11:49.150-08:00Love this haiku. Reminds me of one I recently wro...Love this haiku. Reminds me of one I recently wrote.catgirlslovehaikuhttp://catgirlslovehaiku.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-4663156053856022002009-11-30T21:44:30.600-08:002009-11-30T21:44:30.600-08:00thank you m.
good day!
billthank you m.<br /><br />good day!<br />billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-41978291786872928732009-11-30T18:54:13.355-08:002009-11-30T18:54:13.355-08:00Beagle, scent to scent, to scent.
Nice one, Bill....Beagle, scent to scent, to scent.<br /><br />Nice one, Bill. _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.com