early light different sounds from each house
w. f. owen
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ranch house
under the morning star —
one lit window
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thanks kurt.
bill
true. same stage of day. each a different stage of human day. nice obs.
and thank you for this comment as well.
bill
yeah, a new day, everything wakes up.
"different sounds from each house"
sounds like a morning symphony.
Bill,
my first time to come across one line haiku. hope you don't mind my feedback.
Lu
hi Lu,
no, i don't mind your feedback.
i may not always agree, but i
appreciate comments.
thanks,
bill
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