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9 comments:
I like this one... I think we've all done it... do you think no one is looking under a spring moon?
Hi Dalloway,
Well, it's possible. :)
There is a sense a mystery
set up by "spring moon."
Thanks for stopping by.
bill
thanks frank.
bill
Well done.
thank you m!
bill
One of the haiku's most enjoyable propensities - making the ordinary seem so much more...
thanks patrick.
bill
It has multi-readings to me:
spring moon refilling her wine from his glass
It could be read:
spring moon
refilling her wine from his glass
or
spring moon refilling
her wine from his glass
It maybe just me. :)
Lu
hi Lu,
i wrote it so that there would be meaning
potential. some would say ambiguity. i like
poems that spawn fertile (more than one)
meanings.
thanks,
bill
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