haiku notebook by w. f. owen

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

spring moon refilling her wine from his glass

w. f. owen

Dalloway said...: I like this one... I think we've all done it... do you think no one is looking under a spring moon?; April 16, 2009 3:12 AM
w. f. owen said...: Hi Dalloway,

Well, it's possible. :)
There is a sense a mystery
set up by "spring moon."

Thanks for stopping by.

bill; April 16, 2009 8:53 AM
Frank Williams said...: Very nice...; April 16, 2009 12:17 PM
w. f. owen said...: thanks frank.

bill; April 16, 2009 1:03 PM
Magyar said...: Well done.; April 20, 2009 6:42 PM
w. f. owen said...: thank you m!

bill; April 20, 2009 7:58 PM
upinVermont (Patrick) said...: One of the haiku's most enjoyable propensities - making the ordinary seem so much more...; May 7, 2009 6:37 PM
w. f. owen said...: thanks patrick.

bill; May 7, 2009 6:59 PM
Anonymous said...: It has multi-readings to me:

spring moon refilling her wine from his glass

It could be read:

spring moon
refilling her wine from his glass

or

spring moon refilling
her wine from his glass

It maybe just me. :)

Lu; June 27, 2009 8:22 AM
w. f. owen said...: hi Lu,

i wrote it so that there would be meaning
potential. some would say ambiguity. i like
poems that spawn fertile (more than one)
meanings.

thanks,
bill; June 27, 2009 9:30 AM