spring chill the workers eat lunch in the sun
w. f. owen
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8 comments:
nice. in contrast to rest in summer heat.
thank you pearl!
bill
"a forum for discussing haiku and haibun"
_Whenever possible, I avoid gerunds and other -ing- words, too, the seasonal lables such as Autumn... my option a -hint- of the season.
_Does that make me correct and others wrong? A hearty, NO! 'Tis only a matter of my habit that, never damages my appreciation of lines written by others.
>late snow
the workers eat lunch
in the truck<
_m
thanks m. how interesting: a haiku with similarities to the one i wrote. thanks for sharing.
bill
Bill,
_The similarities of which you write, "ARE this instantanious and -contrary copy- of your haiku."
_I simply looked to the other side of the doorway, and jotted this... to complement.
_m
rain mixed with snow
a
dove
&
a
crow
share the porch rail
hope all is well your way,
ed
Ah, M, I see what you mean. Thanks for
clarifying.
best,
bill
very nice, ed. yes, things going well. spring is in full bloom here, 70s with pollen-laden winds. i hope all is well with you, too.
bill
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