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Tuesday, March 24, 2009

spring chill the workers eat lunch in the sun

w. f. owen

8 comments:

Pearl said...

nice. in contrast to rest in summer heat.

w. f. owen said...

thank you pearl!

bill

Magyar said...

"a forum for discussing haiku and haibun"
_Whenever possible, I avoid gerunds and other -ing- words, too, the seasonal lables such as Autumn... my option a -hint- of the season.
_Does that make me correct and others wrong? A hearty, NO! 'Tis only a matter of my habit that, never damages my appreciation of lines written by others.

>late snow
the workers eat lunch
in the truck<
_m

w. f. owen said...

thanks m. how interesting: a haiku with similarities to the one i wrote. thanks for sharing.

bill

Magyar said...

Bill,
_The similarities of which you write, "ARE this instantanious and -contrary copy- of your haiku."
_I simply looked to the other side of the doorway, and jotted this... to complement.
_m

ed markowski said...

rain mixed with snow

a
dove
&
a
crow

share the porch rail


hope all is well your way,
ed

w. f. owen said...

Ah, M, I see what you mean. Thanks for
clarifying.

best,
bill

w. f. owen said...

very nice, ed. yes, things going well. spring is in full bloom here, 70s with pollen-laden winds. i hope all is well with you, too.

bill