tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post169076404994210848..comments2024-03-01T01:15:20.084-08:00Comments on haiku notebook by w. f. owen: w. f. owenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-78422152284425636022009-03-26T19:09:00.000-07:002009-03-26T19:09:00.000-07:00very nice, ed. yes, things going well. spring is i...very nice, ed. yes, things going well. spring is in full bloom here, 70s with pollen-laden winds. i hope all is well with you, too.<BR/><BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-62251362738792347452009-03-26T19:08:00.000-07:002009-03-26T19:08:00.000-07:00Ah, M, I see what you mean. Thanks forclarifying.b...Ah, M, I see what you mean. Thanks for<BR/>clarifying.<BR/><BR/>best,<BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-80507340546877191242009-03-26T15:11:00.000-07:002009-03-26T15:11:00.000-07:00rain mixed with snowadove&acrowshare the porch...rain mixed with snow<BR/><BR/>a<BR/>dove<BR/>&<BR/>a<BR/>crow<BR/><BR/>share the porch rail<BR/><BR/><BR/>hope all is well your way,<BR/>edAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-37085478365013393172009-03-26T14:59:00.000-07:002009-03-26T14:59:00.000-07:00Bill,_The similarities of which you write, "ARE th...Bill,<BR/>_The similarities of which you write, "ARE this instantanious and -contrary copy- of your haiku."<BR/> _I simply looked to the other side of the doorway, and jotted this... to complement. <BR/>_mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-71876592361089367332009-03-26T08:23:00.000-07:002009-03-26T08:23:00.000-07:00thanks m. how interesting: a haiku with similariti...thanks m. how interesting: a haiku with similarities to the one i wrote. thanks for sharing.<BR/><BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-91140852785242529392009-03-26T07:03:00.000-07:002009-03-26T07:03:00.000-07:00"a forum for discussing haiku and haibun"..."a forum for discussing haiku and haibun"<BR/>_Whenever possible, I avoid gerunds and other -ing- words, too, the seasonal lables such as Autumn... my option a -hint- of the season.<BR/>_Does that make me correct and others wrong? A hearty, NO! 'Tis only a matter of my habit that, never damages my appreciation of lines written by others. <BR/><BR/>>late snow <BR/>the workers eat lunch <BR/>in the truck< <BR/>_mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-87819530919267042862009-03-24T16:30:00.000-07:002009-03-24T16:30:00.000-07:00thank you pearl!billthank you pearl!<BR/><BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-22073434566058398202009-03-24T16:16:00.000-07:002009-03-24T16:16:00.000-07:00nice. in contrast to rest in summer heat.nice. in contrast to rest in summer heat.Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251168248457758117noreply@blogger.com