night sweats a plum thuds to earth
w. f. owen
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6 comments:
Bill;
_It's interesting that, with the change of but one letter... an e for the a... the meaning of this changes? _m
hi Magyar,
i'm not sure i follow you here...
bill
Sweets... instead of sweats.
_Just my instantly oblique 'first reading' of sweats.
_m
i think i'm tracking here bill ...
sweets instead of sweats
either way ... i really like this!
ahh, i see now. thanks Laure!
bill
thanks Magyar. it took me awhile to see it.
honestly, that did not even occur to me.
bill
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