early spring a plastic flower in her pen
w. f. owen
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10 comments:
great poem. i like the way the "p" sound pulls it along.
thanks greg!
bill
Good one, Bill. I thought your previous haiku tried too hard, but this one has a more spontaneous feel to it.
We're *maybe* half way through winter.
Verification Word: snerc
thank you!
bill,
i guess we're close enough to the day for these...
valentine's
day
the
knots
in
our
shoestrings
valentine's day
the
sensous
curves
of
a
snowdrift
ed
wow ed, i love the shoestring haiku/senryu!
bill
hi Bill,
these haiku are lovely reads. very personal.
I think my favourite was on the gate in your hands. I know exactly what you mean.
Dalloway
thank you, Dalloway, i appreciate it!
bill
nice. I've been looking at neighbour's plastic flowers wishing them into scent.
thank you Pearl, there's always hope!
bill
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