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4 comments:
hmm. look like the error of the dangling participle. i would definitely puncutate
-manoj
the eatery was located in the mansion of a lumber baron who built the place in 1874 on the
labor of men he'd of never sat
down to dinner with.
every restaurant reviewer in the city afforded the cuisine four
stars.
her lobster stuffed salmon was
charred & dry.
my venison medallions bled across the china plate despite my response
of "medium well."
anniversary day
scrubbing the dirt
from last year's potatoes
hi ed,
fantastic work here! thanks for sharing. if
you want, i can put as a post for all to see
without clicking on "comments."
thanks!
bill
hi manoj,
thanks for your input. i'll consider it, though
i think the reader sees where to pause.
thanks!
bill
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