This blog is an extension of the ideas presented in my book (Haiku Notebook Second Edition, smashwords.com, 2010). It is intended to be a forum for discussing haiku and haibun. My hope as an educator is to stimulate interest in writing these forms. So, please feel free to post. [NOTE: click "comments" to read poems by other poets, as well as discussion]. Thank you for visiting!
Friday, April 25, 2008
fat doves
under drooping clouds three fat doves on the fence
2 comments:
feels like clouds are sitting with those doves on the fence. great.
Thanks Ričardas, that's exactly how it
seemed to me.
Bill
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