Sunday, October 30, 2011

autumn evening her pills lined up by size

w. f. owen
#haiku
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1 comment:

Hechiro said...

Please forgive me for I love the imagery that your words conjure up, but is this a haiku?

This no doubt says more about me but I see a poetic thought rather than a haiku.

I realise that a haiku can also be a poetic thought but the way it is designed, structured, developed means it is more than the sum of it's parts.

Please educate me! Thanks, Hechiro