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rain fall clatters through the leaves a dusty path
__I see rain drops grounding on the children's dusty path, and about each 'drop strike' a wee cloud of dust... 'till that dusty path becomes muddy foot prints. __Natural changes. _m
Just a private note: __Zen-like? __Thank you Bill, but the only wisdom I can aquire and transmit, is seeing... and saying as I see; this is a trait we all have and use in differing degrees.
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rain fall
clatters through the leaves
a dusty path
__I see rain drops grounding on the children's dusty path, and about each 'drop strike' a wee cloud of dust... 'till that dusty path becomes muddy foot prints.
__Natural changes. _m
thank you m for your Zen-like passage.
bill
Just a private note:
__Zen-like?
__Thank you Bill, but the only
wisdom I can aquire and transmit,
is seeing... and saying as I see; this is a trait we all have and use in differing degrees.
tnx/_m
well, it struck me that way. you are right that most everyone can see, but not all can "see."
bill
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