tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post6234769964858114098..comments2024-03-01T01:15:20.084-08:00Comments on haiku notebook by w. f. owen: w. f. owenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-28268240557274633722010-04-19T08:08:54.674-07:002010-04-19T08:08:54.674-07:00thank you Frank!
billthank you Frank!<br /><br />billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-79226115796106801692010-04-19T03:52:44.716-07:002010-04-19T03:52:44.716-07:00I love this one Bill. Although you write in one li...I love this one Bill. Although you write in one line, in my mind it seems to naturally and rhythmically falls into three lines thus:<br /><br />longer days <br />the fruit tree <br />begins its droop<br /><br />The last line is brilliant...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.com