tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post3682081539334297242..comments2024-03-01T01:15:20.084-08:00Comments on haiku notebook by w. f. owen: w. f. owenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-39097506183075761412008-05-27T23:03:00.000-07:002008-05-27T23:03:00.000-07:00It's a good one for sure greg.Thanks for commentin...It's a good one for sure greg.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for commenting.<BR/><BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-15178129493215486712008-05-27T20:59:00.000-07:002008-05-27T20:59:00.000-07:00I agree with Bill... "falling star" is a great poe...I agree with Bill... "falling star" is a great poem. one of the best examples of combining two wholly different images I've ever seen.<BR/><BR/>- gregGreghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15344808703550376121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-77093642661538609702008-05-27T19:14:00.000-07:002008-05-27T19:14:00.000-07:00hi ed,what a wonderful compliment.thanks very much...hi ed,<BR/><BR/>what a wonderful compliment.<BR/>thanks very much ed.<BR/><BR/>don't you just love these moon poems?<BR/><BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-78470483388468559862008-05-27T17:43:00.000-07:002008-05-27T17:43:00.000-07:00bill,one of the first haiku i came across when i b...bill,<BR/>one of the first haiku i came across when i began to develope an interst in short poetry was your...<BR/><BR/>full moon<BR/> the crater left <BR/>by a melon<BR/><BR/>this poem remains one of my all time favorites & is a great example of "elegant simplicity.<BR/><BR/>ed<BR/><BR/><BR/>half moon<BR/>a flyball crosses<BR/>the dark sideAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-51515856815150371992008-05-27T13:16:00.000-07:002008-05-27T13:16:00.000-07:00hi ed,I especially like the simplicity of "falling...hi ed,<BR/><BR/>I especially like the simplicity of "falling star."<BR/>Nice work!<BR/><BR/>billw. f. owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000159086728348420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8831746103730488405.post-30390000533327808142008-05-27T13:14:00.000-07:002008-05-27T13:14:00.000-07:00black coffee unfolding, the pinkof a morning gl...black coffee <BR/> unfolding, the pink<BR/>of a morning glory<BR/><BR/><BR/>high noon<BR/> the house painter's shadow<BR/>paints in the shade<BR/><BR/><BR/>falling star <BR/> the plink of a piano key<BR/><BR/><BR/>thought i'd cover morning noon & night.<BR/>edAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com